by miiss lala   Jan 24, 2005

**this is my fist poem please vote and tell me what you guys think. it would mean so much!

i thought that you loved me
i thought you true
but in the end
it all turned out blue

you took the chance
and played a game
you did it all
without any shame

how could it be her!?
she was my friend
how could you both deceive me
how could you both play pretend

when you finally did admit it
my eyes began to tear
because loosing you
had been my biggest fear

still i was stupid enough
to give you another shot
that was another
lesson well taught

it's over now
we've said our good-byes
we both did it
with tears in our eyes

I'd never thought that it would come
that with each day
I'd love you less and less
but still i wish it didn't have to end like this


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  • 15 years ago

    by Aysha

    great job for ur first try! keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Incredible job! You must really have the talent for being a poet if this is your first poem! Keep them coming!


  • 15 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    gr8 poem!! loved it and ohh ya....WELCOME TO THE SITE!! ur one of the family now...keep it up!! i really wanna read another peom by u!!

  • 15 years ago

    by :)butterfly_girl:)

    i feel you i just lost the one guy i have loved with all my heart you should read the one i wrot its called "I LOVE YOU MATTHEW" it says everything about me and him. and it was i great poem

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