Amazing! x

I really like this poem! Keep on writing :) You have alot to share

your stucture makes the rhymeeasier to follow. heartfelt poem

that is an awsome poem! very enjoyable! original yet so strong and the feeling so sad! Keep writing, i really enjoyed this poem!
luv kt

thank you for the comment
ur poem is so cute! ~
God Bless
Love Heather

I love this poem. I wish I could copy right this and give his to my ex.. Cuz it's how I really feel. 5/5

This poem was really good. I liked this part best:

i only gave half truths to you,
but mostly tainted lies,
but never would i figure,
that would lead to our demise,

Thanks for the comment on my poem, it was really appreciated! Take care and keep it up!

the conent of this poem is great but...you could do some work on it to make it over all better...~sherrie~

hmmm... i can't make it over.. i comes from the heart.. not a book...

Its good. I liked it. When you said wow on mine, was it a good wow or a bad one? Just wondering. =/.
-jen