I really really need to get out of this town. Let me know what you think

thanks for the comment!!

ok, no i am not gonna just give you it's a good one , i like it!....but i will say to be completly honest, i loved the first 3 stanzas the most, the ending was a tad weak but the 1st 3 stanzas caught true emotion...created such vivid imagery and provoked thoughts of where you live and how hard it may be. I also loved the way you repeated in the 3rd line of each stanza, thought provoking! All in all, i think you did well however so definant 5
God Bless U
Love Heather

nice poem johnny! ;)
but you know I LOVE all your poems!
keep on writing, I love this poem!
love ya,
-Mols

awww ;.; beautiful!! *makes out with your poem in human form XD* j/k this one was great!!

that's a really really really good poem and very true, our town sux i hate it its so freekin small

this part is my fave cuz it is so true

All the faces that I thought I knew
They all wear masks and I can see right thru
Yeah I can see right thru
To their true identity

great job bro. keep em comming

thanks for the comment...thought i would come back and read ur poem again b/c its so good lol!! God Bless U

Love Heather.

Thanks to all

hi, I LOVE YOU! lol ttul,
-Molly
o btw.. hopefully you get online tonight cuz after work im going to try... maybe like 9 or 10?? be on if u can!!
-love yas

awsome job!! another qonderful poem! a 5 out of 5

..wait.. i already commented on it? >.> oops...

Yet again, wonderful poem. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more.

Amazing Poem Yet AGAIN.
Don't Leave The Town Without a Pencil, Paper, Your Inspiration, And a Computer. Keep Sharing.

Failed.
*A Fan*

wow,,this was like, outstanding. just god.. you're so talented *jealous*!! =) lovely write...hope you keep writing xxx

-Mortalidaga
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