i alwasy love to watch Butterflies n whenever i see them i wonder how short thier lives are !

aww, how creative? very beautiful...

and thank you for the comment

God bless
love Heather.

Thank you so much for your comments ,they mean alot to me : )

I loved that poem and the idea of it too. It's the kind of poem that really touches me and it cheered me up...:) i loved it!
~Sonja~

Thank you so much,am happy that it cheered you up,lol :)

thanks for your comment i loved this poem! i gave ya 5!

thanks ashley... : )

nice poem and it has an uplifting beat to it. I enjoyed the way you put it. It was short and too the point.

I like how you used the butterfly to use the metaphore for not wanting to have any burden or anything like that.

Great Job.

Five/Five

I really enjoyed this poem. Gave you a 5..short, but sweet and to the point. :) Great job Darla.

~Lovely, and brings a smile to my face. Good work, Keep writing.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

Really sad Rua, the ending kind of caught me off guard, it was all pretty and natural and the *whack* the ending is all sad like. well done (again)