Comments : Butterfly and I

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    i alwasy love to watch Butterflies n whenever i see them i wonder how short thier lives are !

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    aww, how creative? very beautiful...

    and thank you for the comment

    God bless
    love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Thank you so much for your comments ,they mean alot to me : )

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I loved that poem and the idea of it too. It's the kind of poem that really touches me and it cheered me up...:) i loved it!
    ~Sonja~

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Thank you so much,am happy that it cheered you up,lol :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    thanks for your comment i loved this poem! i gave ya 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    thanks ashley... : )

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    nice poem and it has an uplifting beat to it. I enjoyed the way you put it. It was short and too the point.

    I like how you used the butterfly to use the metaphore for not wanting to have any burden or anything like that.

    Great Job.

    Five/Five

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    I really enjoyed this poem. Gave you a 5..short, but sweet and to the point. :) Great job Darla.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~Lovely, and brings a smile to my face. Good work, Keep writing.
    ~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    Really sad Rua, the ending kind of caught me off guard, it was all pretty and natural and the *whack* the ending is all sad like. well done (again)