Let me know what you think

Hey, this is really good...creates a good picture and story...keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

that's a really good poem. but bro what girl are u talkin about??? im confused did this really happen, cuz i dont remember it. great poem though. ooo and the one about the preg girl i wrote is about a friend of my that you know from my school. not me... im a good girl, lol. great job

No it didn't happen, just had an idea and went with it

..omg... this is your best poem ever johnny!!! i wanna give it higher than a 5 soooo bad!!! omg i absolutly love it!!!... thats what i say about all your wonderful poems.. but eh... this is my favorite!!!

hey Johnny!
good job! I LOVE all your poems, i really do... your such a great writer, and I love it when you get a new poem!
keep it up,
-Mols
hey- e-mail me sometime!! love ya

wow, you are so talented buddy, what a great poem, one of the best i have read...love it *5
Love Heather.

Another Brilliant Poem.
I Love Your Use Of Words,
They bring The Poem Alive.
Your Really Talented Johnny,
And By All The Replys You get I Think You've Noticed.
Thanks For Sharing It All With us,
Very Much Appreciated.

Failed.

wowee...you're just...so...incredible..
like wow...
you leave me speechless pretty much...
umm, okay, wow, i love this...i'm sorry if it is true, sad someone killing themselves :(...*hug* amazing write. never stop, please, you're so talented. <33 xxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow, that was amazing, the scary thing is I relate to the poem. of course it wasn't a girl.... great poem.

This poem is really sad, but very well done. Is this about one of your friends?

excellent...i love the surprise ending where the man gets rid of the guilt.
~Freak~

Wow. What a vivid poem.

Chills ran down my back when i read this
i completely agree
no one kills themself for someone else
its for selfish reasons
no matter what ne one else says
prolly one of my favs of urs