War zone

by Sinister Soire   Feb 2, 2005


Rumbling ground burning skies
Terror in young children’s eyes
Bombs are dropping over head
People everywhere lying dead

People falling down with anguish
Falling to their knees in languish
The loving families are separated
As soldiers kill with knives serrated

The rattling guns are blaring noise
Rata tat rattling in endless poise
Screaming people run and hide
From the enemies that come inside

Nothing is left for the last survivors
These are the countries drivers
The last remains of great civilized
Populations of masses unorganized

The bombs fell and the guns shot
But what that’s there was really got
Parents died and babies lost
The war was fought but at what cost

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Great poem which captured the essence of war nicely.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    dude....THATS AWESOME !!! lol, ok I'll shut up with that....LoVe !
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Captured war well, great describing, had a good rhythm to it and the rhyming seemed natural, great job overall xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kit

    It's REALLY good( not to mention REALLY true)!

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Great job hun, I loved this one...you're awesome at ones like this <33...wish I could be with you at tmes like these, I love you hun, you're so amazing, all of you...I wish I could be your sunshine every second, up close and personal, you know? I love you hun...try to stay positive always, till I'm with you, and even then, I love you <33 xxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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