brilliant poem! at first i didnt quite understand but then i read it again and i did.

Well writen

Nice style...like it.5/5

wow, great poem. I like the time theme you chose, really, really damn good. I'm no poetry expert, so I can't say what you did right or wrong, but you wrote nicely.

Oh i like this....dark and creepy...stay strong
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Great poem Robert.. keep it up.. I voted a 5! PLEASE check out any of my poems.. thanks a lot.. hugs

Wow I love your poems alot.
there much better than mine.
thanks for the tip.
im gonna work on it.
But i am only 15 so im kind of a starter.

wow i like this poem i really dont understand the title but im blonde. lol overall 5/5
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paulette

you suck

omg don't listen to spongebob, i'm mean come on are you going to listen to someone who wears square pants? you shouldn't i think this is a great poem! Keep writing!

~PLP~ lil slam~

-claps-

By the way, I can expand my mind beyond sadness and grief, but whether or not I choose to write about it is my choice. And the poem that you commented in with that was about some trouble I was having with a friend of mine, not depression.

So anyway, I do not understand this poem.

Tiff

Very good poem Robert. I liked it how you made it into a count down. (I'll have to use it sometime ;) ) Well done.

nice short but great poem