Great job! You have a lot of talent in writing good poetry. Keep up the great work & thanks for your comments on my poetry. I hope to read more of yours soon!
-Kate
P.S. If there's anything else you want me to comment on, just let me know.

hi you left a message on one of my poems"Rachel at 2005-02-03

back off da gurlz find your own rhyme,
cuz you just playin and aint worth my time. "you see im a boy,and scottish,can u explain what you mean thanks

That was really good, although you could have added more to it. But its still good.

That's great. I love the shortness of your poems, you take very few words to say what you want to say.