Sad poem :( Great poem aswell tho xxx

I really like this poem. I can relate to it. When i was younger .. my dad would always be drunk. never at home. my parents seprated and now hes a alcoholic / drug dealer.. does drugs and all. Good poem. I like it =)
Paula <3 <--- Keep on writing

P.s ,. could ya check out some of mine?

Sad, but very meaningful poem. Keep up the good work!
-Kate

very strong poem ... i can feel the hate in it ... it made me angry as well ... no offence or anything but if that was my father he would be knocked out the second he hit my mom

great poem . . . very sad . . . but an amazing piece of writting i could feel your pain well done 5/5 x x x take care x x x

wow... is that true..that was amazing..beuatiful.but so so sad

5..VERY INTERESTING

Very well written poem! It reminds me of my friends dad when we were younger. Very sad! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

I can connect with this poem because my dad was the same way....except he was completey sober. You did a good job of reaching out to the readers and having them cope with your pain. 4/5.

Wow, that is sooo sad...I kinda relate to it. My dad use to be like that, but he NEVER did drugs and he has always been in my life. Great poem, very emotional.

Take care, Sabrina

Great poem... 5/5!! keep it up.. Please check out my poems "Butterflies" and "My Dream Boy Dosen't Exist" please comment/vote.. thanks a lot

wow. good stuff, keep it up.

xx

WOW! I really love this! So powerful and full of emotions! Check out mine sometime!
Love always,
Haily
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Omfg..that is sooooo good! 5.5 sure...it showed anger n frustration..i luvd it!
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