awsone i pixtured it and all great writer

hey christopher whoever this torn 2 pieces chick is really likes ur stuf...

Cheerless poem...but that can be reality.

You should know, though, that it can and will be okay one day...times can be tough and at times you may feel hopelessness...but good times will come too. ;)

Great poem though it doesn't go into much detail... just sounds like the thoughts of a heartbroken boy. Emotion comes through strong. I like it!

xox

another good poem....keep writing, it seems like agreat way to vent.

great job, i like your poems. 5/5. keep writing.