wow, that was really good. well done. 5/5 ~great job~

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Realy good

That is cool,

wow, that was really awesome. 5/5 i do think you should revise it, though. i think you misspelled some words in there

that was brilliant! really well written 5!

u miss spelled a word.. u put for in place of foe* at least i think its suposed to be that way. if im wrong so shoot me lol but a really good poem 5/5

Your work amazes me! Really! U write about so many different unique things. :)

another great poem, ur an awsome writer, i hope toi read more of ur work soon, great job!!!