I can relate to this poem, hope your alright, take care xxx

such a great poem, in relation...i hope that all goes well for you!! Blessings to you

love Heather.

this poem is ver well written, i know, as i was reading it, i can relate to the emotions convayed as someone very close to me did the same thing, it was if you were in my head, lol. i hope that you are taking care of yourself, and you are finding your blessings, that have been hidden in your nightmares.
great poem....good job, so keep more a commin'.
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it is a well written poem ... really good ... but why did this person make you so mad is what is missing ... how did they lose your trust what did they do or what did they say ... cause by the looks of it you just mentioned all the good things they did ... but really good poem i liked it and it flowed nicely

wow, such a strong poem! Great work!! Keep writing, i really felt that!!
luv kt

Well written . Beautiful

thanks everyone for commentong, it means alot and never goes unoticed xxx

thx for commenting on my poems no its not true but it was really well thought up and based on the song dance with my farther again by luther van dros
thanx again and you really have an art for writng poems keep writing girl
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That was really something. It was well written, emotions that is true, it flows very well. Great work!!! =) 5/5

thank you for your comment, ill be sure to return the favour

A really touching poem Happy Days. You wrote it very well, and even though it's so sad, I'm very glad I read it. Very nice work! Thanx for the comments on mine.:)

great poem, I loved it.

hey this poem is so gd ur a relli talented writer keep it up
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ps fanks for the comment plz cld u check out 'run away' and comment on it if poss it wld mean alot

wow....girl you have some depressing stuff.....great poem...
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

oo wow!!! that was emotional..it was like i could feel what was going on!! great poem!! keep your head up!! take care. :)

luv it