Comments : This is it

  • 16 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Hey great poem. Really, its sad too though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    Thanks took some time to read yours too so check your comments honey.

    Love Rach xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    A sad poem but very well written! I will have to check out some of ur other poems! Take Care! Brooke

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    Thanks Brooke xx was having a rubbish day

  • 16 years ago

    by Danny

    that was a great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    aww thats sad...but beautifully written, well done. Hope things are better for ya. And good luck writing your books, I think it's really neat that your using your talent like that!
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    You wield your words very well indeed, I felt everything you were thinking. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hans

    beautifull poem rachel a lot of feeling and very easy flow this is the second i read from you very nice im gonna check out the rest now very nice
    Hans

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oh hun that was beautifully written and expressed! I enjoyed reading it. I can tell your work comes from the heart. That was amazing!!! :) I liked the bit where you put " I'll put things right with my family and home" I think it shows you are caring if you get what i mean? :)

  • 16 years ago

    by glenda

    ei i like your works...they are very meaningful...its worth reading them..

  • 16 years ago

    by Hina

    Nice nice. This is surely a piece worth reading..good structure and flow. Keep them coming. Good luck!
    ~Hina

  • 15 years ago

    by Hades

    A true masterwork in every way, emotion flows from every word. Keep it up.

    Hades

  • 15 years ago

    by Colege Dropout

    Gr8 poem. Do u really want to give up so much? U love your family and im sure they love you, cant they understand what they have you doing?

  • 15 years ago

    by Rajkamal

    Great Poem. Loved the way you expressed everything.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love the words you use, and i feel like the poem is taking me in..very well done!!.i love it