Swimming

by Sinister Soire   Feb 6, 2005


Once I hit the water
I’m in a land of mine
Away from all the pain
Where everything is fine

It takes me to my special place
Where I can be my own
And everything is just me
And truth is really shown

I love the feeling when I’m there
And the water takes me in
Takes me under its wet wing
Until the races fin

Once the water devoirs me
I become part of the race
Where nothing else matters
And everyone’s an ace

And every time the race is over
I feel just like I won
And I know I’m not alone
When everything is done

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Oh I loved this poem so much! :) I definitely wish it was Summer, because I do miss swimming terribly.

    Keep up the great work and take care! God bless you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awesome poem hun, flowed well and rhymed good, everything was perfection, as it always is. I love you so much, i wish i could make you feel like this always, i love you hun you're so incredible...i love you, i love you <333 xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    damn computer...anyway, as i was saying before my computer f u c k e d, its a really good poem !!!!! love
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    nice one logan ! rea

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Nice poem, I read a book once with the someone who used water as an escape, this poem expressed them feelings greatly, keep it up! xxx

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