Oh wow!!!! How sweet is that?! That has to be one of my favorite love poems by you!! I agree with leanne I simply loved the way you ended it!! You have such a way with words and thats what keeps readers interested!! Your work is so magnificent and you blow me away with every peice you write!! Keep it up your awsome!!!
Always a fan,
~Chelsey~

Your poems are so great! I love your writing! keep up the good work and if u get the chance please read and comment some of mine... i've been writing a lot.
-Mols

powerful passion

i love all your poems
I wish i was as good as you!!
Check out some things ive wrote and comment to maybe help me out a little LOL cus all ur poems are awesome!! keep writin them!!

It was pretty long but really worth the read. Everything was so beautiful taht it didn't feel forced and when I saw some rhymes I wondered how I had missed them. Your words were really good at capturing some differences between being and what something is.

You are a very good writer, I enjoyed reading this, great job

I really love these poems that view the two sides of of the subject...so compelling and well written.