i like the simpicity which uve used but a little more elaboration could really bring out the feeling u are potraying..and ya it is a subject which most people can realte to..so good going!

This was a good poem...I have a few suggestions....ill email them to u, still 5/5

I normaly like a bit more of a rythm scheme just it was well done *Clap**Clap*

I usually like rhyme scheme poems but yours still needs more details about the girl and you. Elaboration is a better word. I give you a "4". Keep up the good work! Take care!
-Conner

I like it. I really like blank verse poems when they're written well, and this one was, great job!

that was really good alot of emotions. o can i use ur poem because my friend is hung up on this one guy and he doesnot know that she exits.~!!!~

Ireally like this,. i know how it ffeels. keep up the work. thanks for the comment
Paula <3

sad but beautifully written!

i really like this ... it sorta grabs me in and lets me feel your feelings i love it...~~sherrie~

WOW good poem dude.. thanx for commentin on mine... ur a great writer
luv always janice
xoxox

I liked this poem and teh feelings expressed in it, but I felt that in a few parts, the wording could have been better. For example,

That I have nothing to fear
Just to be with you

Perhaps add another line with something like, 'is enough for me', or change the first line to make it clear what 'just to be with you' is supposed to mean-wow, that was a long comment! lol. Good poem though.

Great work.... keep it up!

great job... 5/5

I liked this poem alot... it had a ring to it i give it a five out of five keep it up!2