Dad...why?

by Lauren   Feb 7, 2005


Whats going on?
Why wont u just tell me what happened?
Grandma told me something had happened to you...
She said u were in a accident n that u loved me...

Where are we going?
Why is everyone so quite?
Why wont anyone tell me n my brother whats going on?
Mom said that it was really bad n she doesn't know whats going to happen...
WHY? WHAT HAPPENED? none will tell me...

We get there the doctor said your dad looks pretty bad n don't be scared...
We get into the hospital room n there you lay...not moving just laying there?

Why? Why me? Did i do something wrong for this to happen? I'm only 11...

The doctor tells us that he didn't make it....

Why? Why me? Why couldn't the person in the other car die instead of my dad? He was the one who didn't stop at the yield sign...Why?

So many questions,Why cant i just spend one more day with you? I love you sooo much dad and miss you soo much!

Sorry this is really bad but its soo true

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kyla

    Dang girl.. yea it is hard i am sorry u have to live with this pain as well mi dad passed almost 2 years ago..its the hardest thing i have ever had to deal with... i am sorry for ur loss.. ur a good writer tho...

  • 18 years ago

    by Fat Girl

    Sorry about your loss...so you were 11? i was 16...its sooo hard to have lost some1 sooo close. i lost my best friend that night

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Yea i can see now a death of a family memember at any age but especially when ur young anyways thanks for commenting my poem i really wanted some feedback from that it took alot out of me to write that

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Thats sad
    great job though!
    i love it
    5/5 and dont take anything less!!

  • 18 years ago

    by vanessa

    thanks for the concern [your comment to my poem long ago], i was 11 too; the age where everything starts to make sense. and i do wish i could spend another moment with him.

    good luck
    Vanessa

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