All I can dream about
Is sailing away
The thoughts that I ponder
Sink like a weight
The dreams I have dreamt
From beginning through closure
Are bringing me pain
And untimely exposure
So sit with me today
Tell me how to survive
Thou I always know later
You wont be drying my eyes.
I trust for a moment
That you some day will care
But for now let me drown
And give back an icy stare.
Departure is unending
But your love is a well
A heart made of crystal
That broke as I fell
it seems as if you have alot to say in the poem... but you have so much to get out.. you scattered it makeing it hard for the reader to follow... but i do like your style.. it's different!
