This was okay, keep writing!

i liked it a lot! it was so true!! keep up the great work!

-jenn

great poem!

Great poem, well done. We all can relate to this one at least one time in our life. lol

wow . . that was really great, i can totally relate 2 this one, very very very good job!!

Great poem.. Very well-written... 5/5!
Take Care.

awwwwwwwwwww great job!!! I loved it, keep up the good work. This poem was awesome
~JJ~

great poem, 5/5!! it flowed really well but the punctuation was a little distracting...
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

i really like it! great job! im gona go and read pt 2 and 3!

much love
savannah

good job