good job, i like it

wow... that was amazing. beautiful work there, keep it up xxxx

thats real good, kinda reminds me of what i feel like in lesson actually!
but great job
polly

I love this poem! I can relate! You have great talent! Arrivederci!

5/5

Your best poem that I've read so far. Excellent job. Keep it up.

wow i loved this poem! there was great metaphor and it flowed so beautifully! i'll have to read some more of yours!

-jenn

I really like it, i am 15, and maybe you could kinda relate (to some extent) to my songs. check em out adn email me if ya wanna chat... rimvballgurl@aol.com

great poem!! i know how you feel..keep it up!! :)

Good poem, interested way to put things. I know that there is a lot of things...that i could say about this poem, but it would just sound like the others. so Goob job.

Five/Five