Wow once again another amazing poem! I really like it! Excellent work keep it up cause I can tell u have a lot of talent to shar:o)!
Shannon

very beautiful!! i loved it so much! youre an amazing writer!

-jenn

wonderful ending!

Beautiful ending and we all do have to learn and grow. Beautiful poem, enjoyed. lol

omg these poems r exactly how i feel bout my ex-bf, cuz i sitll love him soooo much and i would have loved 2 have him in my life 4ever but now he wont even talk 2 me, well i love ur work, ur really talented!!

very good conclusion, exactly how it feels, you try to move on but something holds you back....
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

hehe i like it alot s0o sad but still a winner!

much love
savannah
5/5 and i like all the parts! good idea!

good one. again~!!!~
5/5