hhhmmm.....i thought things were good between u too...i guess not...i liked this poem but i really didnt get the part about the nun...that confuzzled me....anyway....good job and keep writing! luvs

Thnx Bob! I changed it to set with the sun instead of gone with the sun...good idea. I only used nun because I couldn't think of another rhyme...I don't know how I missed sun!!! Thank you!

Hey its mandy, just wanted to say great poem but who is it about?? Dont know

~ nice one, keep up the good work :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Good one! Your rhyming worked pretty well again, without making it too forced...and I know a lot of people can relate to this...nicely done.

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