Haha. The first part was pretty original to write about but i especially liked the whole twist. Really nice.
-A

Haha, the first part was good, and the ending was cool. Nice twist...

the ending was good but different, i give u a 5

Wow, DiGEC!! This was so hott, sry that it was a dream! lol.. Keep em coming!

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i was falling into it but it had to be a dream grrr! lol....very good though, you're so creative! God bless

love Heather.

Wow the beginning was really good. And sad at the end, but funny lol. Keep on writing!