one of the absoulute best by you!! i love it~wonderful~*5
love Heather.

wow! wow! beautiful poem! great work! :) sure, 5!

WOW that was a great poem its one of the best i ever heard seriously you write really good!!! keep up the good work!! I LOVED IT!!!

Short but so sweet. I enjoyed this one very much. Great job. lol

I do enjoy simplistic poems that flow as well as this one did. I am a slave to needing to tell extravagant stories, so I am not always good at doing this "flowing" works. Nicely done.

thank you for all the comments Holly, I'm waiting for some more poems. I check my faves list everyday and I never get that red number grr lol! God bless
love Heather.

Every colour and it all rhymes, glad to see your writting again