aww u did a good job! love it...

Hey,Nice poem! I totally enjoyed reading it! Keep up the talent:P-Psychotic Heart xoxo

Great poem! 5 stars for this one... hugs

there were some spot6s of really good writing and with time it could be great but with little structure it seemed to almost be lost read over this again I think it could really be good with some revision also look at V-day it is my version of valentine day tell me what you think take care

I can really relate to this! I spent my Valentines Day alone this year. It's funny I had a card for someone as well I never did give it to him but I still have it. Really enjoyed this poem! 5/5 Brooke

there where parts tat where so good keep it up

hmm i like this poem. good rhyming

wow... you have a real talent for this! keep it up, nice work! : )
Luv Niki

Hey i can totally relate to this poem, tis really good well done
take care xxxx
p.s fanks for the comment on mine xxxx

Oh wow, this is deep. It's sweet and moves the heart. Good choice of words.

Awwl.. i absolutly loved this one.. its sad that you were alone on valentines day.. but i think you should have given him that valentine! it mite have made a difference.. well you never know.. don't wonder about the past though! well anyways.. i hope everything worked out and im sorry it took me soo long to respond.. all of your poems were excellent and thanks for the comments nice job. xox take care xox.

Excellent poem! I relate to this a lot. I understand the pain you feel, and the talent you possess is incredible. Very well done! Your diction, imagery and structure are all flawless. You do keep the reader's attention despite the length of your work. Very well done, once again!

Yeah definatly not your best work at all

I sit here alone.
I wish I could say,
I wish I'd pick up that phone.

you wish you could say what? it sounds like your saying i wish i could say i wish id pick up the phone you can say that....

thought I'd give it to you,
But then I thought again.
Is this something I should do?
Would I lose you?

the whole piece is about you not having him so its not like you can actualllly lose him...

i didnt like this sorry if im too honest but imma give it a 3