lonely use of rhyme. expressive writing.
keep writing, you write very well. i like your work.

when you get time, comment on my poem, knock knock! nidhi has come, thanks.

god bless you! take care. for this one, sure a 5!

if u leave of the ! at the end, i may have a more emotional impact. just a thought, another- amazing! 5/5!

thanks guys for the comments!! you all have lovely work yourselves!! :)

This is really good ! keep it up!

Awww this is sooo cute and true to some people