You really do a great job on these kinds of poems. They kinda keep you on the edge of your seat. Written very well and enjoyed. lol

Very cool poem. It makes you think. I like your use of words . Different and yet catching. Good work.

Deep Thoughts- Miss Krueger

well, well, well, you finally have let the reader into your past havent you, letting us know the fears you go through at night, in your dreams there is always fear, dred of the coming night, and the nightly visions that visit you in your dreams, you convey them very well,and anyone that gives you less than a 5 on this poem, is not reading you as you write, or failing to understand what you go through. keep writing about those demons and oneday you will write the poem they are afraid of, when that poem comes to your mind, you will set yourself free. as ever your friend Harry

great poem! i love it! so many people can relate! beautifully written too! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

The imagery is outstanding sublime inspiration is a little over my head at points in the poem all the more reason to revisit when I am rested. FASCINATING

I wont pretend I get you, but I do like and respect you.

Looking forward to your next one, your poems are never dull.

very cool poem, indeed

interesting way to write a poem/story!

Hey, this was also a great poem with so much passion and darknes within it.
i was so close to shivers!

-suzie

That was an amazing poem... You asked me a long time ago to read it... and i must've skipped over your comment... But i have to admit it was very well written... Much better than I've been writing lately... I liked the flow and good use of vocab... I can relate... I've felt that way before.. I no this was written a long time ago... So i hope you've grown from this dark place... I no i have... Email me.. You seem really cool... Just mention the name of the poem and I'll remmeber who you are... Cuz i tell so many people to email me i get confused...

~peace~ 5/5 great job!