Hey, that was reallllllly powerful! ... good poem! Very emotional, thanks for sharing it! and thanks for your comment!
Take care and I look orward to reading more :)!

I had to read this poem because it matched your name, so I took it as somewhat of your "theme poem," if that makes sense.

The poem itself was fantastic. I loved how the rhyme scheme was not predictable and very loose. It worked for this poem. The story was good too, I havent seen too many heart break poems with this much intensity.

Loves, K.

Hey really great poem. It's beautiful. *Red*

Wow, very good poem.. 5 stars for this one!! Keep up the good work..
Please check out my poem "The Silver Moon Sparkling" It would mean a lot..
Hugs

another gr8 one:)...i really like your stuff

This is awesome! This could be turned into a metal song so easily, as a mtter of a fact, this sounds like a song, is it?

really really good..you have a talent..keep it up..5/5

whoa...this was amazing work, absolutly extroadinary. This is the first poem of yours i've read and you've pulled me so now i have read them all! thx for the comments on my poems, if u want to be friends my myspace is www.myspace.com/1ay1a
*weeping wolf*

Very unique style, but it fit the story perfectly. The structure also added to the intensity. Very nice. It was a joy to read some of your work. I hope you never stop writing. Good luck and take care.

~rolo

What a powerful poem, brilliant!!! You have so much talent in writing, just keep them coming!!!! I love this poem as well as the other, very emotional and strongly written...

*Hugs Sabrina*

I truly love that...amazing...the end, the last line threw me off a little...I'm not completely sure I know what you're talking about...deep and powerful...I applaud you.

xxx