wow, beautiful job, very sad, but it is a great poem.
well done.
-K

Nice job girl :)
-A

hey awesome poem, i love it, hey i have a favore to ask please read my poem listen and comment cause no one else has thanks!

~lil slam~ :)

Great poem! 5 stars!! Keep it up!

Rebecca.

great poem! i love it! my dad has beaten me like that so many times. . .it's good to read a poem that i can relate to. . . keep it up!

Love, Taylor

this is a really awesome poem its really powerful thnx i enjoyed it

omg!!!
i no exactly how u feel
gr8 poem thou definately gav u a 5
if u hav any time read my poem called "dad"
peace out
xx hayz xx

Wow... I reeeeeeeeeeally really liked that poem, and im kinda hoping that hasn't happened to you. Never has happened to me, i dont know my own dad, but if it has, im real sorry that osmeone as great a poet as you, would have to go through that, if not, i dont have a lot to say besides that i think you could have made a difference to some people who wont stand up to their dads.

wow wonderful poem!

This is and awesome poem. You're really talented! Keep it up! I am so sorry that you have to go through this! I hope things somehow get better!
Thank you for the comment, it meant a lot.

Love,
Tiff

This poem really spoke to me, it´s like you have written about my life. I feel your pain, I really do........

This poem had such pain and heartache in its words, whatta write a great poem to read keep it up and stay strong :o)

Ww, very emotional poem. I really liked it and I hope it's not true! 5/5 Take care!

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wow, this was so intense... im sorry if you had to go through this... i know how you feel... wow, amazing job.

Nicely put. The last stanza refers to a stronger person...be proud of every moment you stand tall: don't let his fire burn you.

Wow, excellent poem even if it so sad. I know how you feel. I hope things get better for you.

Take care,
Rachelxx