Wow, very powerful, that's all I can say.

wow strong words great poem! you expressed your experience in hospital and all your feelings brilliantly! i loved it!!!!! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

OMG wow thats really good.i didnt care how long it was.. coz it was so bloody good. the way you write it i can picture it all so clearly!!
love ya
janice xoxox

Very nice.

I thought I had commented on this one before, but apparently not. Good job! 5!

again im blown away with nothing 2 say but ur amazing!!!!
lil kit
xxx