Tear

by Brian Ahn   Feb 15, 2005


And as I walked away,
A tear formed in her eye,
She wanted to cry and let it all out,
She wanted to tell me how she really felt,
As i walked away, her sight began to blur,
Her tear fell from her eye and slowly took her heart,
She hit the ground as tho it was nothing,
And when I heard that horrible sound,
I came running back to her,
As I’m sitting there holding her in my arms,
That tear left only a few words for her to speak,
That tear only left enough strength to pull me down to her lips,
As she barely said "I love you" she slipped away into nothing,
And I stayed there crying.

all the tears she wanted to cry

when she thought she shouldn’t.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LeAnNe

    Hey, thanks for the comment on my poem "me or drugs"... and I do see what you're getting at... but that's not the case here. He doesnt do drugs to help relieve him of any kind of pain, he started doing them because he was bored and someone offered them, and then he got into heavier stuff and he changed. I've known this kid my whole life, I know who is his and what he's about... and drugs did change him... perhaps they changed his outlook on life too but they changed him as well. His whole personality changed and he became a jerk like the group of people he hangs with now. That's not just a changed outlook on life. I was there for him for everything, I know where he's coming from, but I couldn't take the way he treated me anymore. I'm not the kinda person who only sees things from one side... sometimes things just don't work out... friendships don't always last for ever. And I definitely don't agree with what you said about if I was a true best friend, I'd be right there doing it with him... because I have different views on things doesnt make me any less of a friend... So why dont you try looking from the point of view of a person in my place and see what that would feel like. Unless you've been on that side, you don't know what it feels like. So don't tell me I don't understand.
    thanks.
    -Leanne
    (nice poem by the way)

  • strong words..... great poem! >>5/5<<
    bec xXx

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