ThE DeViLs InSiDe HeR

by Carrie Aguilar   Feb 15, 2005


"THE DEVILS VOICE INSIDE HER"

She sits alone in her room and listens to depressing music, she cuts at her arm with razors and burns herself with needles. She doesn't know whats wrong with her , she hates her life when she wakes up in the morning she wishes she would have died in her sleep. Everyday It gets harder and harder for her to hold on to her life. She does anything she can to hurt herself, this girl thinks to herself, wondering why she is so stupid and why everyone hates her? What did she ever do to them? Why is she so ugly? The voices in her head get clearer and clearer, she can hear what they are telling her to do now. They are telling her to kill herself but she knows to try and mute out what they say. They also tell her to hurt herself and hurt others, they say to burn things they tell her shes ugly, and that everyone hates her. They say don't trust anyone. Not even yourself! The razor in her hand cuts through the flesh and blood shows in her skin, tears roll down her cheeks , anger builds up inside her, and it just causes her to hurt herself worse and worse. She does so many things to herself hoping that it will all cure the pain somehow something!

This poem is about my oldest sister who was always depressed and sad until she was introduced to love

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well written, but disturbing. Everyone goes through a faze, were it seems as though no one cares, and their alone in the world. But only the strongest of people know how to come out of it..and they realize how much they would have missed if they fell into that trap. Keep on fighting, and NEVER give up, NEVER give in..if this poem is about yourself, then I wish you all the best of luck. Remember, life is to be lived. Well done, and keep up the great work..poetry is the cure.

    §The Only Rose In This Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    Hey hey! Nice poem, I love it! Might wanna work a bit on phrasing but a definite 5! Keep it up! Check some of mine out if ye got time! Arrivederci!