wow strong words you seem really talented excellent poem
>>5/5<<
bec xXx

That was so good! sad with a good ending...somthing I don't see to much but I like it! 5/5
xxxChristinaxxx

WOW! Awesome. I loved how u told this and how u showd that we get a socond chance .. keep up the good work..

~ShAtTeReD*HeArT~

This was so amazing, this was the type of poem that i had to read faster so that i could learn the ending too it. i loved it and it was such an amazing poem. It truely shows who you are on the inside at the time...this is a very well versed and constructed poem. I loved every word of it and i couldn't believe it.

Your an amazing poet for such a young girl. Keep at it for sure.

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your comments and your welcome for mine, i always return the favor, i love having comments on my poems...each one i read and try to comment back to the person on one of their poems. loved the ending for this one. your on my favorites list also!