Aww.. I must agree with Meena.. beautifull sad indeed. Great job, Kumar. Keep it up and take care!

God bless you!!!

nice, and sad.

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

Beautiful... touching......I read it more than 3 times already... great woRk!

One of my favorite parts>>>"So many dreams i had dreamt of being with you till the end,
living a life happily with you being my wife and best friend,
never did i wish to see a tear from your mesmerizing eyes,
i would do anything,even give up my life to end your cries." <<<<

take care
CyN

the title is so cleverly thought out.it caught my attention and thats what made me read it. some authors dont tie the title into their poem but you had an awesome title and tied it in aweseomly.ive never heard of you but you have already become a favorite of mine. keep rockin the poems
-danny

You and I are two men in the same boat lets jump out ehh.. Well done.
-Aishite Imasu

hey wow that was awsome i loved every line i loved everythin in ittt ur a great poet good work :D
peace

Kumar, My friend, WOW! Such beautiful words that comes from such a beautiful heart. Your beautiful poems always touch my heart. Take Care lol

it's amazing so sad and really moving

~ great job ~!!

amazing !! very touching very heartfelt it portrays feelings of heart tat cries n not mere eyes.

--chavii--

this is a very touching poem, keep it up god bless you man

beautiful poem