hey i really like this poem, from what i have read of yours your a reallg good writer! keep it up!

~lil slam~

wonderful poem! :) you gotsta smile so you wont feel so blue! because you smile like i try you'll be happy too! hehe, that rhymes.

good poem BUT u stole my profile pic!!!!!!

Well done! I love ur work and I understand what u feel! Keep it up!

very good. just woderful.

alot of us can relate to that feeling. u put it in words quite well. keep on!

vedali