This should have more votes! Uhh i love it, the rhyme and rhythm of the poem was great. Stunningly well written :D

<<33 Kalah

Wow...i loved it girl...keep it up
love,
-Gems

WOW....this was a brilliant peice i dont know wherever it came from either but it totally ROCKED.

"Spiders in head
Webs in heart
Blackened ashes
Weakened start"

This part right here is my absolute favorite it brang the poem together and created it to be a beautiful masterpeice. well in my eyes
take care always 5/5

and thanks for the lovely comments.

Scooby

Wow..that poem was truly amazing! Your going to my favorites! I luv all your poems..I can relate to them! Keep it up!:o)
Shannon

Good Lord, Girl. That was utterly breathtaking. I was in awe. You're really good, and I don't know what i expected, but I hope your work is always this great!!!!!! You're amazing!! keep It up!! And thank you soo much for every single comment you've written and every vote you've registered!!

I've written 2 new poems-A Secret and War of the Worlds. No one's done anything yet. But, I'll check out more of your work later, I've got to go to bed unfortunately. ttyl, thanks a lot!

xoxo!Sierra!xoxo

Babe, you're awsome, and i know i just said that up there, and that was a while and everything. Write some more poems. Newer ones. I can't wait to read them!!!

Aw thanks for you comment!!!! I'm glad you do support me to write more poems! There need to be more people like you in the world!!! Luv you lots<33

~Sierra

What an intriguing poem. I have very mixed feelings about this- I like it, yet at the same time it hardly appeals to me...
I think the imagery and metaphors of insanity were very appealing; yet I think the rhyme was a tad too forced. Some lines would've been amazing, had the rhyming not been included.
Well, don't take heed to my comments if you do not agree- I will, however, check out some more poems by you.
:-)

Hiya! *waves* This is an amazing piece of writing! It was so different to most poems I read! You have loads of talent! Grrrrrr im getting jealous now! Lol I give you a five for this.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Thanks also for the comments on some of my poems. It means alot.

the only reason i dont hate you is cuz you're my best friend....but i am insanely jealous

Wow i love this poem! omg like its one of the best ive seen today! great job pls do keep writting!! mind if i add you to my favs? all your poems are amazing!

it came from inside your head. i liked this indeed.

Nice words choices,..love the way the poem, describes itself. lovely...absolutly lovely. xxLISSA

I LOVE IT! ITS BRILLIANT! KEEP IT UP. :)

5/5