hey, good job. It flowed very nice. 5/5

~no more

This is pretty good. I can relate to this poem. If you truly love someone you will wait and not regret it. Good work.

Wow this was sooo good, you can really tell that you put your heart in to this one...It's very emtional and so well written, I can't wait to read part two =0) BEAUTIFUL!!

*Hugs Sabrina*

Very nice poem *hug* Hold strong and dont give up, if you love her dont let her go. 5/5
Much Love
-xx-
Broken

Very well done indeed, Sir. You and me seem to have a great deal in common.

Hey, it's a great poem. This was a great way of expressing your feelings... very well done! 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Wow that must have taken a long time to write. It is gr8 2! Im looking forward to reading more of your work when I next have time.

it was a good poem, but it was hard to follow. i couldnt really understand what you were saying throughout the poem but it was still good.

Very sweet and sad all at once. There were some grammatical errors, but I still enjoyed it. Nice job.

Ilove this guy!!! so much that it makes me wanna cry.. mwaah!! love you..