this is great a really great write!! Keep it up.

Thanks for the comment, it meant a lot! :)

Love,
Tiff

This poem i can feel is so close to your heart, it is very good. thank you for the comments on my work, check out some of my latest stuff.

great poem! i'm glad you didn't end your llife....

~angel of the flames~

so sad and beautiful. made me cry.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Very touching... good job! 5

Wow, It's a really heartfelt and touching poem Jomar. I think you did a great job. I'd just recommend you watch out for when you switch from past to present tense forms of words, but I realize english probably isn't your first language, since it isn't, you did an excellent job. It was great.:)

No problem josh, I still have hope although I know I lost I still have to fight thanks Angel Of flame, Yup its not hehehe Rainbowrachel thanks!!=PThanks you so much everyone for the comment I really appreciate it all!! =)

Nice, I cant ever seem to sit down and write a long poem I just slam it all in a couple lines and it comes out fine, but I enjoy reading long ones when they come together and yours surely did, nicely done.

I LOVED IT, THAT WAS A GREAT POEM...5/5

Wow.. Great poem.. keep up the good work.. 5/5

Very good poem. I always find it amazing that people can write long poems cos I am terrible at it. Great work, keep it up.

great poem!! i esp liked this part:
"For the time has come
And reality was near
Dreaming a fantasy
That could never be real"
keep it up!! :)

Wow. I really really really like, (no to small of a word) loved, (no, to frequently used) well I can’t find the words 2 describe it. Any way I really enjoyed it. I have been there. In fact I noticed that u like Rurouni Kenshin. I’m guessing u took a lot from the series. Me to. When I meet him, the one, I was (still am) going threw a period of time where I felt like I had to repent for things I had done in the past. I knew it wont last and I knew I would get hurt but I still eat the forbidden fruit (or basically did something I new I shouldn’t). At the time I felt like what ever he did to me I deserved it and need to stand strong, I had something to live for. And I know u will think this is corny but I lived for my dog, Chaos. He had been abandoned once and I knew I could never forgive myself if I aloud him to be deserted again. Well I loved ur poem and sorry for writing so much.

bye
tourniquet

Very well done I did notice some grammar errors as others had pointed out but not a big deal they can always be fixed. A exellent job on this poem.

I really enjoyed this poem i love the way you wrote it i could tell you took your time... i love the ending... Xox Sherrie

Luv ur poem thnx 4 da commen:)

This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over her just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem.

that was really good!!! keep writing, dont waste your talent!
love,
~Katie~

i did enjoy this love is a powerful emotion i must read part 11 good job

OOOOOO this is soooo sad! It was beautiful though too and it flowed so well! Keep up the great work and I hope everything turns out good for ya!
Much love......
hAiLy