I love this poem. It's very intense, I feel your pain while reading. Keep up the good work...

Philipa

~ very nicely written :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

i love dis its so good. i feel exactly like u do. im bi to and my gf dumped me for her bf. cause he doesn't like to share. and i told him dat i was wit her cause i don't like to like pretend dat nothin is goin on. so yea i think if i didn't tell him me and her would still be together. i can't understand her she always says she loves me but she isn't wit me n e more. i jus hate it. it hurts so much. but wen i see her i can't help to smile. i still love her and she loves me and i hope dat on day i could go back wit her.

this again is a great poem and i hope that you do get over her i no how hard it can be i'm in your shoes!

Very cute.I really like this one. 5/5 keep up the good work.

Aw omgsh im sorry. that is exatly how i feel!!! good poem 5/5

Really sorry for the way u feel but even after being so depressed u wrote something amazing here!! this is so damn xpressive and i really liked it.

b+ive and remember...the best in life is yet to come... take care and all the best..