I luv it, it's really great keep it up

I LOVE THIS POEM!! YOU WRITE AMAZINGLY!
THANK YOU FOR SAVING MYLIFE

That's an awsome poem! so true. 5/5 keep on writing!!!

Wow! An excellent poem by an excellent poet. ;)

You were consistent with the rhyming scheme, you spelt correctly (it's rare nowadays) and the 'thanks for reading' at the end made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ^_^

5/5

Wow very impowering i love it, people like me going through hard times can look to that and go yeh thats kind of true ^-^ i LOVE IT!!!!!

Your piece was very well written. .......You most certainly have talent. .......it's an excellent piece of work. You use your words well.

Your piece was very well written. .......You most certainly have talent. .......it's an excellent piece of work. You use your words well.

I really liked this poem! I added it to my favorites, keep writing! Thanks Amber

Understanding every word.
You think as I do.
Good job, well written.

Jade

Awesome
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Beautiful poem.
It is very sad, but wonderfull written.
Touching.
Love it.

Wow.....really good. good point 2...keep up the good work

I really liked the flow and ryme of this poem. Also the words are chosen well good work!

I really like this poem, i know exactly where you're coming from. keep up the good work.

I really really reaaaalllly liked this poem!

OMG!!! this is an amazing poem!!!
you are sooo good!!

Oh I loved this one...You are intouch with the inner workings of your mind and that is hard to find in poets...keep up the good work and vote and comment on arabian sands""crown of thorns" "my tears"...thank you so much

Even though im against the idea of this poem, i like it.

Man it's deep, you and I write about the same things or I that's what i say but go ahead and check mine you'll see, but really your poem did touch me and the ending was great I really saw it coming the title "god!!! its perfet"

Very nice..Is it sad...yes..but is it true..most def..Good Job..