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  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifers lair

    Wow I really love this one...

  • 17 years ago

    by MzLonely

    Stunning beautifull....uve left me speachless...

  • 16 years ago

    by porcelain

    I LOVED it. (: very good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hope

    This is deap i like it i can relate to it

  • 16 years ago

    by Andree

    I think this is amazing you have a lot of talent!
    compared to yours mine seem so pathetic.... sad but its the truth . Keep it up!!
    ~~byrd~~

  • 16 years ago

    by LadyHalliwell

    I'm loving it

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow.. simply amazing.. i LOVE the ending.. it's altogether very chilling and deep.. excellent work.. needless to say the flow was excellent.. great job.. keep it up =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Piece of Me

    Absoltely amazing! i can feel the pain and i can relate all to well. keep writing
    *Aleera*

  • 16 years ago

    by `windstruck_

    You poem is amazing..so full of emotion. I hope you're okay. Keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by JRS

    I love this poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by free2bme

    I love this poem. I recited in the front of my class when we chose poems to say. You are an inspiration. My poems are no where near as good as your already dead!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by girl

    I love this. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by scarlett

    This poem is amazing! Great job! 5/5

    Scarlett =D

  • 16 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    Splendid job...I loved it...It really is something I can relate to.

    5/5
    Brit

  • 16 years ago

    by Francine

    This is really good because I can really relate to it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rob

    Wow...

    that was deep man!

    had a profound effect on me, i can tell you that!

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by -Jay-

    That is freakin excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by tim

    This poem is the bast poem i've read so fear

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Hero

    Awesome, loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by kibbz

    Wow this poem rox. so much emotion, and i'm sure many people can relate to it.more, more, more...
    laters : )