I loved this. Beautiful.

This is realy good i lovedit!

You may be a good poet, but if you're going to promote yourself as you have you may want to brush up on your technical skills in English. There are things called grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization...I could go on, but I think you get what I'm saying.

All in all, however, good.

Wow, I like thi poem... it could be stalkerish if you changed it alittle.. lol.

*yea, most guys say they love you just to get ni your pants, but not in the case of the one I wrote that poem about.. :)*

GreAT poem! I feel the same way so i give u a 5!

Excellent