Comments : What I would do to be that one

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    I loved this. Beautiful.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    This is realy good i lovedit!

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    You may be a good poet, but if you're going to promote yourself as you have you may want to brush up on your technical skills in English. There are things called grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization...I could go on, but I think you get what I'm saying.

    All in all, however, good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow, I like thi poem... it could be stalkerish if you changed it alittle.. lol.

    *yea, most guys say they love you just to get ni your pants, but not in the case of the one I wrote that poem about.. :)*

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    GreAT poem! I feel the same way so i give u a 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excellent