Normal Car Ride

by Emily   Feb 21, 2005


It was a normal night
a Innocent drive home
my best friend was diving

thats where it end.

i woke up with my face on the cold ground
my friend was in the ambulance and they drove her out.

i was confused and didn't understand
what just happened?
is this a dream?

there was the car
hit a grove of trees
shattered in a instant
it was half its normal size

how come no one cares about me?
whats wrong with my friend?
will she be ok?

then the said it
so quiet as if they wanted no one to hear
they mumbled to the crowd the other girl is dead.

dead? ho can this be?I'm standing right here.
can't you see me?
i feel fine
I'm really all right.

but no one looked.
they all started to cry.
but they do not know me.
I'M STILL ALIVE.

i reached my hand
over mt chest
this would be my one true test
i put it over my heart to hear a sound
but nothing came out

how could this car ride take my life?

i guess the car that hit us, was very drunk.

my best friend survived.
but she prays everyday
saying how it should have been her
it shouldn't have happened this way

she doesn't know it
but I'm here
but she knows that when she crys
I'm the angle that wipes her eyes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Devin

    Hey girl your great but where do you get your ideas? how does it come to you..

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    good job. However, you have many many spelling errors. Plus, dont think your an "angle" but instead, an "angel?"

    ~Hina