This was great... thank you for your comments... (I haven't actually commented on poems in a really long time) So than you again for the comments.. I'll continue to read more.. I like your style of writing.. Take Care
Angel

This poem speaks to my heart, I know what´s like....We all just want our parents to love us! Great poem.

I can see that you got your emotions out, this was very intense. I love how you can use poetry to vent your feelings like that sometimes when needed. I loved the poem as well! No complaints here. keep writing!

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~ very well written mandy, you are expressive in your work. great job done, write any story-based poem, it'll be a hit for sure!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

aww mandy that was such a great poem but sad ...luv ya

I know what you feel. Good poem

i Gave It a 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I love this poem. It's so sad. Kinda different,but I really like it. 5/5 Keep up the good work! 3>jess

hey great poem and thx for msgs mine L8er days

Hey, this is really good...itz good to get out the feelingz..and you made an awesome poem...keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

~*~good poem...its good that you got ur frustrations out in poetry rather than other things...keep up the good writing.~*~

that is a great poem i can relate except mine would be to my dad but i really liked it

Sorry to here about ur mom but u were probably better off without her. I love the way u write whats on ur mind! Good Job!

great stuff! i especially loved the last line. Keep it up :)

Your poem to me was such a sad story. You wrote from your heart, and me as a mother. it scares me, sometimes I don't think we know what we're doing, until we've already done it. I raised my kids with love, and they are both grown, 23 and 25, I hope they never felt like what you wrote about.If they did I ask for their forgiveness, and maybe you could find a way to forgive your mom. I don't know the situation, but I do know your dad is an awesom person, so make sure he knows that from the bottom of your heart., and please know your writing made me think, about my life, so you my dear are very talented...........Great job, very well done. Love ya Becky

thanks so much<3