i understand about the brother thing. my brother comes first too. its hard for me not to have an attitude. really good poe.

I can relate to this poem, great job onit. Thanks for the comment on mine! Finally someone from the little Rhode Island! lol

I realy liked this one
goodjob:)

aawww hun, i know how that feels ........awesome poem though keep on writin'......i'd like it if you could look at some of mine and make some suggestions, im new at the poetry thing and i'd like to improve =)

wow...wonderful poem! i like it alot. and thank you so much for the comments on my poems. it really does mean so much. x x

That was a really great poem... good work

ooo, I like this one, I like ones that have more of a rhyming theme... I gave it a 5! :D

*lol, glad to see you like that one better, you really think it was funny? lol*

Great poem! i really liked it! 5.0

I can so relate
Nice Work
~HazE

"Your emotions are filled with anger and hate
With me you will not try to communicate " these lines amoung many others pulled me in i felt the emotion very well done