dark...i like it!

Good poem... sorry, I usually have more to say in reviews- but I have nothing else to write for this one.
I will comment on another of your poems- hopefully i will be able to give a more detailed comment rather than just another bland "good job"
Anyways I'm gonna stop blabbering :-)
BTW. Is it possible to spell 'spiders' as 'spyders'?

well, i don't think "spyders" is a correct spelling at all, but i like it and i think it puts a nice "personal touch" to my poems that include this word. I probably have 10 or so poems that include "spyders"... anyway, thanks for the comment!!

Not one of your best, but excellent rhyming...and it's something different but with the "spyders" still so yeah...I like it :)

xxx