16 and ready 2 die

by Already Beautiful   Feb 22, 2005


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Sixteen
And ready to die,
She whispered silently,
As she began to cry.
They lay together,
The battle was won.
She held him close,
Through the rising sun.

Never forget me,
As I'll never you.
Keep all your dreams,
They'll help you pull through.
Hearts can be broken,
Dreams turned to fear.
Light turned darkness,
But our love is sincere.

Although I am young,
And had so much to give.
It's just my time,
But you need to live.
I fought for freedom,
For the sky to be blue.
Our hearts to be together,
So I give my life to you.

He wiped her tears,
And gave her one last kiss.
I love you so much,
You’re the one I will miss.
I will meet you again,
This isn't goodbye.
I'll see you in heaven,
And together we'll fly.

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NOTE: This poem is a fantasy type story. So you understand it better

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  • 18 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    i loved this poem!it was probably the best poem i read all day!it literally brought tears to my eyes!keep up the great work and thanks for commenting on my poem!*hugs*
    xoxo
    <3Chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by FaLlEnDreAm

    Heya!!! Nice Poem U Got There Sad:'( Keep It UP!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Already Beautiful

    thanx eveyone for your support.

    bunnyxx00

  • 19 years ago

    by Tina

    Who cares if it was a fantasy story thing, it was still amazing and your extremely talented keep up the GREAT work

  • 19 years ago

    by Dayna

    wow... it really touched me... i cant believe how sweet that is... keep writing..its really strong!