You really are the man at the Art of Fluency. Jambono!

Wow back with a vengeance! Well done
glad to see your writters block is gone.

Dave......

~ wow! nice write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

wow! excellent poem!!

damn girl! Glad to see you back w/ even better poetry-5 all the way

love ya and BIG HUGS
-Heather M Craig

Wow, that was really great! This is my favorite stanza...

Take me and break me
rip me apart.
Torment and beat me
breaking my heart

It's very powerful. Thank you soooo much for the comments on my poems! They mean so much! :)

Great poem hun, keep it up!

Love always,
Tiff

excellent!
your words really flow so well in all of your poems
i can relate a bit too, i really loved it
keep up the wonderful work, you have a real talent!

~*LorienElf*~

wow...im speachless...i liked it alot though...good job...5/5 ♥