Dancer in the rain

by katie!   Feb 23, 2005


I see her in the falling rain
Trying to forget her pain
Dancing faster then her fears
Raindrops cover up her tears

Silently she takes the night
Dancing until she takes flight
Like an angel from the ground
Flying swiftly not a sound

A dance so lovely in the sky
She no longer wants to die
She is free now, as a bird
Seperated from the world

As she floats back down to land
She begins to understand
She still has her crimson tears
She still has her awful fears

She stops dancing and takes flight
Like a demon dark as night
Running back home to her pain
Waiting for the rain again

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    5/5 very meaningful -- I liked it a lot. <33 xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    wooow
    i liked this poem
    its great and have a wonderful meanings
    keep it up
    Nema
    XoXoXoXoX

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    What a concept!I'm really...what can I say I didn't expect this...Please please please take alook at my poetry, and tell me, is there any chance we can comunicate?Cause I feel a strong connection to your poems, it's unique and I would be honored if I could write a poem with you someday...

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    wow i loved it 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    First when i was checking your poems,i was reading thier titles to see what catches my eye ! i went like Oh "Dancer in the Rain " is really magical lemme read it ! i was like Please please GOd let it be cool,let it be like its title..God answered me,LOL
    it was really beautiful,capturing indeed

    you know what? you succeded picturing that girl,i was like floating with her ,
    in your poem "not in the Rain" :p LOL

    those were my fav touching phrases:
    Raindrops cover up her tears

    Seperated from the world

    She still has her crimson tears

    Running back home to her pain
    ---------------------------------
    i just LOVED it ,thanks for this great
    time :)

    *10/5

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

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