Take My Life!

by Priscilla   Feb 24, 2005


I can't take the pain,it's just too strong
I have put up with it enough,I've put up with it too long.

It should be over,It should be the end
No one was ever there for me through the thick or thin!!

Sitting in this empty house,feeling so alone
Having pain deep inside that I haven't ever shown

Wishing that one day soon I would actually be gone
If you havent seen by now,I don't want my life to go on!

I'm still a young girl,with so much still left to do
But I won't be alive to do it,my life will soon be through

Hoping and dreaming is all I've ever done
Now I'm going to take my chance,to go and have some fun

The kind of fun your thinking of is not what I'll do
I'll cut myself deep,hoping my life will be through!!!!

~plz vote/comment and I'll return the favor on your poems/quotes!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    very deep...i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    thanx every1 ..it really means alot to me! thanx again

  • 19 years ago

    by Noelle

    I love it. This poem is awesome you are a great writer.

  • 19 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    this is a great poem! i loved it, and i think a lot of people can relate to it. i kno i personaly can. stay safe, strong, and healthy. oh, and this is definately a 5/5...anything lower would be an insult to ur writing abilities!
    AntiSocial16

  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    thanx guys^